Kia Ora Room 4, Wow! What neat poems. I had a quick look at a few videos, and I am super impressed. I liked how Oliver changed the angle of his words - it reminds me of snow falling. Beau, you read your poem with a nice loud clear voice. Ka pai! I also liked how you all recorded your videos in a quiet space, some of us in Room 2 need to take the time to do this instead of recording in class (as you will see and hear). We also created Winter Poems, just like you so check them out! Keep up the awesome mahi, from Miss Poi
Thank you for your nice comments. We were kind to each other and we were silent when someone was recording their voice. Some of us went outside. From Room 4 Makauri School
Kia Ora Symphon'e, your poem is pretty good. Dre liked how you read your poem using a clear voice. Bruce noticed that you added "like" to each line. You are very clever. From Room 2
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Kia Ora Room 4, Wow! What neat poems. I had a quick look at a few videos, and I am super impressed. I liked how Oliver changed the angle of his words - it reminds me of snow falling. Beau, you read your poem with a nice loud clear voice. Ka pai! I also liked how you all recorded your videos in a quiet space, some of us in Room 2 need to take the time to do this instead of recording in class (as you will see and hear). We also created Winter Poems, just like you so check them out!
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Thank you for your nice comments.
DeleteWe were kind to each other and we were silent when someone was recording their voice. Some of us went outside.
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hi room 4 .i ilke it.
ReplyDeleteKia Ora Symphon'e, your poem is pretty good. Dre liked how you read your poem using a clear voice. Bruce noticed that you added "like" to each line. You are very clever. From Room 2
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